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gotexchange_mod ([personal profile] gotexchange_mod) wrote2012-03-05 03:28 pm

Comment fic meme #2

After the first round of [livejournal.com profile] got_exchange we had a surprisingly successful comment fic meme going for a while (here's a list of all the fics that were written last time), so I thought it might be fun to do this again. (Like last time, it's posted on the mod account journal because I don't want to enable anonymous comments on the exchange community.)

I changed the layout to one that still supports comment titles. I hope it works for everyone. If there are any problems, please let me know.

A couple of rules, or rather guidelines:

- please include the pairing/character (and maybe a short prompt/kink) in the comment title - both for prompts and for fills.
- there are both show and book fans on this comm, so please warn for book spoilers beyond AGOT in the comment title.
- anonymous comments are enabled, but I'd appreciate if we kept them to a minimum. If you absolutely want to go anon, okay, but I'd rather we kept this as non-anonymous as possible.
- all prompts are welcome: smut, gen, romance, fluff, angst, het, slash ... anything goes.
- and the usual: be civil, no character/pairing bashing, no kink shaming etc.

It's perfectly fine to repost prompts from the last comment fic meme or from the exchange.

As with any kink meme, this is only fun if people also fill prompts, not if there are only requests.

Filled prompts:
Jaime/Cersei: first time
Stannis/Davos: "like sailors, swimming in the sound of it (dashed to pieces)"
Queen Shireen: Shireen comes out on top of the Game of Thrones. Three heads has the dragon, and she is part-Targaryen, after all.
Jaime/Brienne: Modern AU as cops
Jon/Sansa: kissed by fire
Viserys, Elia, Rhaenys: leave me your wake to remember you by
Stannis/Jon: things he shouldn't think - or say
Robb/Theon: we had the greatest expectations (ADWD spoilers)
Roose/Robb, crack: The Young Wolf and the Leech Lord (ASOS spoilers)
Balon/Victarion: Faithfulness
Future!Rickon/Shireen: the last night of the world
Jaime/Catelyn and Jaime/Sansa: Jaime has a secret thing for reheads
Ned/Catelyn: when it became a love match
Petyr/Lysa: Her eyes closed
Jon/Val: In which Jon does end up with Val and Winterfell (ADWD spoilers)
Gendry/Arya: role reversal
Tywin/Joanna: dominance
Stannis/Davos, comfort: small undertakings
Stannis/Jon: things he shouldn't think - or say (second fill)
Roose/Walda/Stannis, crackfic: Pink Attack (ADWD spoilers?)
Petyr/Barbrey, bitterness: Ash (ADWD spoilers)
Brandon/Lyanna: belonging to Winterfell
Daenerys/Viserys: Just a Taste
Roose/Theon, Ramsay/Theon: Bad Blood (ADWD spoilers)
Stannis/Sansa: "I am a Stark, I can be brave."
Cersei/Ned: AU in which Ned did take the Iron Throne and Cersei ended up marrying him instead of Robert
Jon/Satin, crackfic: how Jon Snow learned to stop worrying and laugh at the insinuations
Elia/Oberyn: heart's desire
Euron/Victarion: pre-series hatesex
Lysa and Catelyn after the birth of Robb: lie by the river
Roose/Theon (hints of Robb/Theon): Another man's amusement (vague ADWD spoilers?)
Jaime/Brienne, dirty talk and consensual power play: with a wonder and a wild desire
Stannis/Sansa: wedding (sequel)
Stannis/Sansa and Stannis/Davos, dancing: Wishing to be in Two Places at Once
Brandon/Barbrey, Bethany: No True Knight (ADWD spoilers)
Ned, Sansa: "Sansa was a lady at three."
Daenerys/Robb, AU: Fire, Blood, and Honour
Roose/Victarion, crackfic: When all else fails
Robb/Theon, slight Robb/Jon: War is Not a Game
Stannis/Davos from Ned's POV (hints of Robert/Ned): Making You Smile
Catelyn/Petyr: Confrontation
Stannis/Jon, fantasies: and waked half dead with nothing (ASOS spoilers)
Jaime, Arya: The Shadow
Victarion/Asha: We do not sow
Ned/Catelyn, goodbyes: Songs written with swords
Ned/Ashara: winter song
Sansa - Stoneheart: confrontation
Jon/Sansa (AFFC spoilers, prompt is spoilery in itself)
Jon/Val: with you upon the wind (ADWD spoilers)
Daenerys/VIserys, AU: When the Blood began to Show
Stannis/Davos: six perspectives, six realities
Roose/Walda, crackfic: Leeches for Wolves
Jaime/Sansa, talking about Joffrey: Ignorance and Bliss
Sansa, Rickon: The last two Starks (ADWD spoilers)
Theon/Robb: Regrets (ADWD spoilers)
Cersei/Stannis, seduction fail: Persuasion
Jon, Stannis, Devan, mentions of Davos: Through the Eyes of a Child
Sansa, Brienne: True Knights (AFFC spoilers, prompt is spoilery in itself)
Stannis/Sansa: bedding & wedding night (sequel to this)
Catelyn, Jon (slight Jon/Robb), reunion AU: Lady of Ashes (ASOS spoilers)
Sansa/Robb, AU in which they do exchange her for Jaime: The Mercy of the Frozen Ground
Tywin/Joanna: dominance (second fill)
Jon Snow/Jeyne Westerling(/Robb Stark): post-series - tell me we both matter, don't we?
Robb/Jeyne: what was it like being the queen to a Northern king? (ASOS spoilers)
Robb/Roslin Frey: Robb upholds his vow and ends up with Roslin


Multiple fills are of course welcome.

FILLED: Viserys + Elia + Rhaenys - leave me your wake to remember you by

[identity profile] juno-chan.livejournal.com 2012-03-05 11:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Most days his rage is black and red and smoke, smoldering and sparking at turns, the destruction of his house, the extermination of the dragons, his father cut down by a traitorous knight, his brother, the crowned prince, slain by a grasping usurper that now sits upon his throne. He thinks of silver hair and violet eyes and white skin, he thinks of nobility and honor and purity.

And then some days the rage is blue and softer and something inside him curls like a dying leaf, trembling and withered, and he thinks of silver hair atop of black, spread out on the carpet before a roaring fire.

(The fire is always roaring, Princess Elia in her chair watching them at play says the warmth reminds her of home, reminds her of Dorne. His father sneers, calls her foreign, calls her impure, calls her weak, frail, but Viserys thinks he must be wrong, that Elia must be a dragon, too, to enjoy a blazing fire so, he thinks she belongs.)

He had liked seeing his hair atop Rhaenys’s, had liked the contrast, didn’t mind that she was dark and not like light as a Targaryen should be, didn’t mind that she was a girl and not the prince that was promised. He liked the feel of her small hand in his, liked to tell her stories, didn’t even mock when she named her kitten after the Black Dread.

(He tells Elia so, because no one else does, because everyone else looks so desolute, promises her solemnly that should no boy follow he will take Rhaenys as his queen, he promises and he can almost see it, he would wish it so if it were not a wish of treason, and she smiles and touches his cheek.)

Those days had been quiet and still and there had a been a fullness in his chest that he thinks (he hopes, how desperately he hopes) awaits him once more in Westeros. His throne awaits him there, his future, his destiny, he must not look back at those lost and fallen (what difference does it make, in the end?).

Most days he dreams of fire and blood, but at night he dreams of those unbowed, unbent, unbroken, and wishes words would make it so.

Re: FILLED: Viserys + Elia + Rhaenys - leave me your wake to remember you by

[identity profile] lainemontgomery.livejournal.com 2012-03-06 03:22 am (UTC)(link)
So, so beautiful. There's such a humanity to Viserys here that can be easy to forget when reading the book/watching the show and seeing what a jerk he becomes. I love the tenderness of the relationship you've established between him and Elia, especially this line:

Viserys thinks he must be wrong, that Elia must be a dragon, too, to enjoy a blazing fire so, he thinks she belongs.

Flawless. And his fondness for Rhaenys, how he promises to marry her one day if she has no brother...I teared up a bit.

Really top-notch work.

Re: FILLED: Viserys + Elia + Rhaenys - leave me your wake to remember you by

[identity profile] juno-chan.livejournal.com 2012-03-06 03:52 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much! Viserys is just such a sad, broken character, and honestly I never really thought about his relationship with Elia and Rhaenys, but something about the prompt was just 'yes, this is right.' And I just adore Elia so I can imagine her taking Viserys under her wing, and at the same time, him being a comfort to her, as well, one of the only Targaryens who she is just enough for, just as she is.

Thank you again for the wonderful feedback, I'm so glad you liked it!

Re: FILLED: Viserys + Elia + Rhaenys - leave me your wake to remember you by

[identity profile] sternflammenden.livejournal.com 2012-03-06 03:36 am (UTC)(link)
This is so heartbreaking and adds a real human side to Viserys that must have been, that isn't seen in canon. Beautifully done.

Re: FILLED: Viserys + Elia + Rhaenys - leave me your wake to remember you by

[identity profile] juno-chan.livejournal.com 2012-03-06 03:54 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you!! He's such an awful character in canon, but he's obviously extremely fragile - it's interesting to wonder what he was like as a child. I'm glad you enjoyed! :)

Re: FILLED: Viserys + Elia + Rhaenys - leave me your wake to remember you by

[identity profile] scorpiod1.livejournal.com 2012-03-06 04:02 am (UTC)(link)
This is so gorgeous, how is this both heartwarming and heartbreaking at once? He wanted to marry Rhaenys, just kdjfasd. THAT LAST LINE. This is lovely and perfect.

Re: FILLED: Viserys + Elia + Rhaenys - leave me your wake to remember you by

[identity profile] juno-chan.livejournal.com 2012-03-06 04:09 am (UTC)(link)
Thank yoooooou! Ugh, I can just imagine everyone being so disappointed in Rhaenys's birth because she's a girl and not a prince, and Viserys just not getting what the big deal is, duh he'll just be the king and Rhaenys can be his queen, and FEELINGS HAPPENED. Thanks for the lovely comments!! <3

Re: FILLED: Viserys + Elia + Rhaenys - leave me your wake to remember you by

[identity profile] opheliahyde.livejournal.com 2012-03-06 04:09 am (UTC)(link)
Ugh, this is so utterly beautiful. I really love the human quality bring to Viserys' voice, which is not something you see often in fics that feature him. This is so, so very heartbreaking because of what he becomes after everything's been stripped from him and twisted and broken him, but I love how you portray his relationship with both Elia and Rhaenys, there's such a great fondness that it's almost palpable in your words. This is really stunning work!

Re: FILLED: Viserys + Elia + Rhaenys - leave me your wake to remember you by

[identity profile] juno-chan.livejournal.com 2012-03-06 04:12 am (UTC)(link)
*squee!* Thank you!! Honestly I never really thought of writing for Viserys but for some reason the prompt really resonated with me, maybe because he's such a sad, desperate, broken person that I like to think that at one point he was happy and warm and cared for. Thank you for the lovely words!!

Re: FILLED: Viserys + Elia + Rhaenys - leave me your wake to remember you by

[identity profile] ishi-chan.livejournal.com 2012-03-06 10:03 am (UTC)(link)
Wow, just wow. I'm trying to pick out my favourite parts here, but it's all so beautiful and sad.

Viserys thinks he must be wrong, that Elia must be a dragon, too, to enjoy a blazing fire so, he thinks she belongs.)

but at night he dreams of those unbowed, unbent, unbroken, and wishes words would make it so.


Viserys was such a tragic character, thank you for bringing him back to life for a little while! *hugs for him and you*


Re: FILLED: Viserys + Elia + Rhaenys - leave me your wake to remember you by

[identity profile] juno-chan.livejournal.com 2012-03-06 01:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay, I'm so glad you liked it!! :D He really is such a tragic character, he's so awful at the start of the series but you wonder how his life could have been. Thank you for the wonderful prompt, I never considered writing for him before!

Re: FILLED: Viserys + Elia + Rhaenys - leave me your wake to remember you by

[identity profile] lydzi.livejournal.com 2012-03-06 01:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Heartbraing and beautifully written <3

Re: FILLED: Viserys + Elia + Rhaenys - leave me your wake to remember you by

[identity profile] juno-chan.livejournal.com 2012-03-06 01:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!!! <3
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Re: FILLED: Viserys + Elia + Rhaenys - leave me your wake to remember you by

[personal profile] vaznetti 2012-03-06 08:04 pm (UTC)(link)
This is so beautiful and sad -- you've made Viserys human and sympathetic here. Lovely.

Re: FILLED: Viserys + Elia + Rhaenys - leave me your wake to remember you by

[identity profile] juno-chan.livejournal.com 2012-03-06 09:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! :D He really is such a sad creature.

Re: FILLED: Viserys + Elia + Rhaenys - leave me your wake to remember you by

[identity profile] linndechir.livejournal.com 2012-03-09 12:07 am (UTC)(link)
Gorgeous. I have a bit of a soft spot for Viserys, and you write him so beautifully here. That little detail of him promising to marry Rhaenys is just oddly adorable.

Re: FILLED: Viserys + Elia + Rhaenys - leave me your wake to remember you by

[identity profile] juno-chan.livejournal.com 2012-03-09 04:09 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I have a bit of one as well. Like, he's a terrible little shit of a person, but...you see why, you GET how he ended up so awful. And I'm glad you liked it! I just picture the disappointment of Rhaenys being a girl and Viserys just like not getting what the big deal is, after all, they have HIM and he can totally just marry Rhaenys and everything will be peachy.