This is excellent. This is just ;lashdjfg;flk I LOVE that you started it with Jon's allegiance - just wanting Stannis to be king is a thought he ought to keep in check - and then went on to the other thoughts he shouldn't be having. Such a perfect way to introduce it and so psychologically plausible, in my opinion.
I also love how Jon has this very unromanticised view of Stannis - he's not attractive (or he shouldn't be, not in physical terms and not taken piece-by-piece) but Jon is attracted to him. He might find Stannis' big hands and his harsh strength intimidating but you can just see that he is into it. Oh Jon, one day you will figure that out and be even more worried about the terrible thoughts you're having. ;D
But, anyway, yesss, eeeee, canon!fic and Jon Snow's conflicted, not-quite confirmed loyalty. SO GOOD. I can't believe you filled this prompt twice. You are the best. I owe you, one soul/lots of fic.
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Re: Fill #2: Stannis/Jon, things he shouldn't think - or say
Date: 2012-03-07 02:20 pm (UTC)I also love how Jon has this very unromanticised view of Stannis - he's not attractive (or he shouldn't be, not in physical terms and not taken piece-by-piece) but Jon is attracted to him. He might find Stannis' big hands and his harsh strength intimidating but you can just see that he is into it. Oh Jon, one day you will figure that out and be even more worried about the terrible thoughts you're having. ;D
But, anyway, yesss, eeeee, canon!fic and Jon Snow's conflicted, not-quite confirmed loyalty. SO GOOD. I can't believe you filled this prompt twice. You are the best. I owe you, one soul/lots of fic.